our new writing

last week we did persuasive writing we had a comp to persuade the class we had the number one pet the teacher gave us a weird pet here is our writing

Introduction:

Have you ever wanted a pet but your parents wouldn't let you get them well now you can… Get a piranha, yes I know they are one of the most dangerous fish in the world but no piranhas hardly attack people and it's not like you're gonna be touching it or anything. Now you don't have to throw out your scraps to just rot in your bin you can feed everything to the piranha, bones meat veggies even dead rats or mice that have died, also you don’t have to buy rubbish bags for your old rotting meat.

Reason 1: Piranhas would be a good pet because they are like a garbage eating machine inside your house.

Don't you just hate it when your cat brings in a rat or a bird? Well no more! If you get a piranha you can dispose of all of the disgusting things that get dragged in your house you can say later and just chuck them in the tank! Piranhas eat everything cow, human, rat, dog, cat, pretty much everything `300 or 500 piranhas to eat it a cow  especially red belly piranha

Reason 2 if you have a piranha you will be the coolest kid in the whole school, .all of your friends will want to come see it. Imagine being the most popular kid in the school all thanks to your piranha. If you have a friend and you want them to come around tell them you have a pet piranha and you will get an easy yes!!!!! Time to step up your game and get a piranha !!!!!!!.nowwwwwwwwww

Reason 3:  When you give piranhas food you won't end up having to empty your rubbish bags because piranhas don’t use rubbish. So it saves money for having to buy rubbish bags for all your old rotting meat. Also, you don’t have to feed the piranhas as much as you have to feed dogs, cats and birds. Plus it won’t cost as much money to feed the piranhas as it does to feed other pets.